Hi, The flow of movement through the varied spaces in this building is interesting. The stairs and particularly the combination of the above ground spaces are visually pleasing and intriguing. Although the bottom spaces are also executed with skill, I don’t feel they are as effective as the above ground spaces and it would be nice to see a less ‘push-pulled’ 2D section emerge in the 3D environment. It would be great if more of your posts of your SketchUp model were labelled with the corresponding words you used. Your Stairs Sections are clear and your 18 Sections diverse, showing a intriguing exploration of lines, curves and there combination. Your 36 Textures look at bit rushed but some also show a good control of the pen and crisp line work. You seem to have thought about proportions and orientation within the building having used varied ceiling heights, careful positioning of artists work and the inclusion of people in your model. This can also be seen in the use of the Sandbox Tool in the grounds which has really helped developed the visual understanding of your building through describing the surrounding environment. Hannah
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ReplyDeleteThe flow of movement through the varied spaces in this building is interesting. The stairs and particularly the combination of the above ground spaces are visually pleasing and intriguing. Although the bottom spaces are also executed with skill, I don’t feel they are as effective as the above ground spaces and it would be nice to see a less ‘push-pulled’ 2D section emerge in the 3D environment. It would be great if more of your posts of your SketchUp model were labelled with the corresponding words you used.
Your Stairs Sections are clear and your 18 Sections diverse, showing a intriguing exploration of lines, curves and there combination. Your 36 Textures look at bit rushed but some also show a good control of the pen and crisp line work.
You seem to have thought about proportions and orientation within the building having used varied ceiling heights, careful positioning of artists work and the inclusion of people in your model. This can also be seen in the use of the Sandbox Tool in the grounds which has really helped developed the visual understanding of your building through describing the surrounding environment.
Hannah